Thursday, 12 May 2016

Popcorn writing

 Class Time Snack 

We made popcorn. The colour of the machine was yellow and the top was a see through grey. Vanessa put a scoop of corn kernels in the machine .

After a while we started to hear whirring noises, they sounded like a broken hair dryer. It also sounded like light hail and pouring rain. In about two minutes we started to hear popping noises and it was so loud.

Then  the popcorn was like a flock of birds flying in all different directions, Vanessa tried to catch it. When the corn kernels transformed into popcorn they looked like small bits of clouds.

The melted butter smell was so strong. The popcorn smelt like the cinema. 

The popcorn was salty ,the saltiness wasn’t that strong. In my mouth the popcorn was lumpy and uneven. When the popcorn was on my hand It felt soft and really light. 

By Nadine










3 comments:

  1. "the popcorn was like a flock of birds flying in all different directions," It certainly was! Kiri

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  2. I like how you said " the popcorn was like a flock of birds flying in all different directions." It really makes the popcorn come to life.
    Really cool.
    Abbey

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  3. Very well described Nadine. Keep up the good work sweetheart.
    Fabienne.

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